week 4

That is very embarrassed to say about this story, but i would like to share with you. This is the best experience, i have had in my life about my writing class. I remember, when I was in a five grade, I had to write an essay to describe your favorite animal. I decided to write my dog, but I did not how to describe about him. So I just wrote something like my dog has four legs, he is black, his eyes are brown, and he very friendly. Then i looked up my paragraph, it was too short, and I did not have any more idea. So i tried to write my words as big as possible i can, and I also double or tribe spaces to make me paragraph longer. After, I turned my paragraph in for my teacher. She asked me to stay after class finished. She asked me that "why are you write words very big and tribe spaces?" I was really scared when she asked me this question. I tried to lie to her that i wanted to make my paragraph more beautiful and neat. But she told me that "if you do not have any more idea just write what you have, just do not do what you did." She also explained for me why" Because if you do this, it means you try to take something not important to replace your idea." I remember her feedback until now that do not be liar or cheater in your writing. It helps me a lot because whenever i write i always remember what my teacher said that just create your idea even you only have one idea just go with it.

Do you think i have a good experience about my writing?

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